You're literally so adorable oh my gosh. And I'm sorry I didn't respond to you sooner I've been really busy dealing with stuff and what not, sorry again! But I definitely will check it for book once I'm done handling everything, then I'll actually have time to read it instead of skimming through it. But let me just tell you that if you really love writing or this might just be a hobby for the time being there's always room for improvement no matter what. I'm sure it's an amazing book so don't doubt your self boo! Stay and learn about writing and what you could do to make your books better. Find a style that works for you and stick with it. Believe in your self cause I sure as heck do! That got cheesier than I wanted it to be, sorry :)))
But don't worry I'll check it out and give you my honest opinion soon. I promise.
P.s. I love you more (๑>◡<๑) I'd also love to talk too you sometime