storyteller1103
@IntrovertedlyNot Thank you so much for your valuable feedback.I will definitely take your advice on-board.So happy to have found this community.Have a lovely day
Daveyboy59
Hi Marie, I read your story. Once again; I love your descriptive language and, although I know the path that the story takes (I remember it from class) it was good to luxuriate in your language. It could probably benefit from a bit of editing (for example you use faith when I think you mean fate?) But they are just minor issues. Well done for getting published!
storyteller1103
@Daveyboy59 Its finished. I need to change the settings to complete or sth.I need to have a proper look at this site as well.I did all my uploads whilst working yesterday. I was so keen I did everything in a rush lol
Daveyboy59
Yeah brilliant! Not had much of a chance to explore in any depth but I will get there. Incidentally you suggest your story is only a first part. Are you going to develop it further?
storyteller1103
@Daveyboy59 Hi Dave welcome to the community Thank you so much for your helpful feedback. Definitely needs editing,changed faith to fate, hopefully it uploaded.Isn't this website awesome?