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Hey, I was wondering if you could read my new dystopian book World Left in Pieces. It’s my very first book and I want to improve. Comments and votes and shares would be appreciated. I’m looking for someone that could give me constructive criticism. Thank you so much for your time. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/327826633?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=under_the_stars232&wp_originator=NIlGA9aTFhHESJ6OnskzIJBlKGczabbZ4kaORp71rqYZ%2FMSlgy51xSqjbG1xyGeroeMyhp7fU3Ef%2BIp6JaI1z4F051OAwsc6f64%2F5EGv7S404aUGNltvS6%2FI%2FFxD7K6H

@ jinkookmunchkin9297  thank you!

hey everyone! I posted a new book. it's actually a draft that I considered interesting enough fy to read. so whenever u have time, don't forget to give it a chance:)))
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/308233832?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=storytime_ro&wp_originator=T8MwogHB%2FoZINBojuyj1bKwge0IwHvHy4iIS9VxxTlvvsWajAQr33kmv6DXMW2urZqPrrE0jc6Yir7iQ7gDpuLtu9JkznYcf6FzMLDNjXzSNKVlcmCiUzxZudh9M5ZaW

THANKS 4 ADDING MY BOOK 2 UR READING LISTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT :D

NEWW CHAPTER!!!! 
          https://www.wattpad.com/1186400782?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=storytime_ro&wp_originator=8A6TdMX1qzrYwIWVFtnx0ueZaVdJeGCDuWgSIzi47x%2Bck44LpoEWPDYP0DsgsSRDxflzydAKwZCLmGuSC9W7Ryq8pspkctBYCxQdOG2wFXznUfanLTdw1WLycTFv71Jp

hey everyone! I know I've been absent for a long time, but I had tons of exams... anyway, I just posted this new chapter! every vote and comment counts!!! <3 
          https://www.wattpad.com/1184276959?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=storytime_ro&wp_originator=9i6DI9yWGlikyyjH3zpyUbS3IrrpTQ3Gvtp5kTX6ayYHQabk7TH%2FJFlcgbo%2BYT36Kmf67mLnmRHxofjXm25u46hOZKVvhINtCvtfywAXxk4yZ5DDCSEIKflvd9xV%2Fbji

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Hi 
          Van u pls check my book and maybe vote and comment
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/306012194?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=genewritesss&wp_originator=NNkKh2aJFz801SSAHYR5Yzt47LoFO0rtP5mdI6UOu9PFdlx4USKngvbKoM4jxAeIrzE55eYm5fCR3w%2F8YalK0jiGuJwLtia7Qe3RJF4MC51E%2B%2FdtP7XtfaNKKq%2BB1BJ6
          
          Thank u X

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