straykidslover1438

Sorry for not posting since ,I really want to but nothing is coming in my head and no one is commenting,I will try to post as fast as I can , good night 

AnchalDMandal

Hi l have a small suggestion. You could add some spaces (as in leave lines) between non-related dialogues , POVs , time skips and stuff . Please do not take this negatively I just want to help and I think it will add more clarity to your already incredible and very fascinating storyline

straykidslover1438

I'm thinking about writing a enhypen ff  should I continue 

ArmyPotterheadFFs

@straykidslover1438 
            it has to align with ur plot i love both and i actually do not open this account if i don't have to update and i am on a small break for now . so, if u wanna message me on my other account , @AnchalDMandal
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straykidslover1438

@ArmyPotterheadFFs please should it be a supernatural ff or a normal one 
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