I recently edited Ch 1–5 of Canvas and Crimson.
[Removed]
the goon scene
( misbehaving one) and (the cat scene.)
Added new scenes, including her easy entry into the godown. Ch 1 is mostly new now.
2(no major changes just rewritten)
3
4(no major changes)(rewritten)
5:Date scene update:
No Italian restaurant anymore. Tapish books a private rooftop (no guests).
If you find any Italian restaurant mentioned later, pls ignore or inform me.(But I doubt it)
I’m fixing these loop errors, it’ll take some time.