@studnavy
I love how you write and go in to depth on how the characters are feeling on foul play but I’m loving the book and honestly I can’t wait for more updates!!
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Guyssssss.....I was thinking I should start the sequel of not yours to love. Your thought ?
Please tell me what you feel about foul play kind of running out of ideas here
@studnavy thanks so much for your insight. I was thinking the same thing but I didn't want reader to think I am neglecting some parts of the book
@studnavy I think the book is going great, but I would say this: Try to break the chapters into more paragraphs, instead of just one or two long ones. You have a lot of things happening (Mateo’s sickness, Maya’s dad, Maya and Jamie, Claire, Daria, Lucia) and you should probably wrap one or two up to concentrate on the important ones. The biggest thing is Jamie and Maya, so work on their dynamic, since they might be making a little progress, and maybe get some resolution on a few others so they don’t detract from the main plot? But if Jamie opens up with Maya then you have a lot of options with dates and dealing with parents
Hey guys idk if you guys read this stuff but I get fee engagements here....anyways welcome new followers and I hope you guys are enjoying my books. And I have been thinking hard on that sequel and I will give it to you guys.
Guys ik you guys hate me rn....honestly I havr been busy ....I am a college student school is biting me in the ass. But y'all already know when I am active I serve. Let's chat lmk what u think about foul play. And I have the itch to write married to my professor
Cant wait for the next update on foul play!
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