Qiaana01

@stylequeen_alpha 
          
          Okay, I get your point.But I feel there are two kinds of writers those who build their stories around plot,and those who build them around characters.I think I fall into the second category.
          
          When I started *CYS*, I didn’t really have a structured storyline in mind.I just had these characters living in my head, and the story grew around them.
          
          Honestly, I’ve never been able to bring myself to edit it properly.It’s my first work, and I kind of want to leave it as it is imperfect, raw, and a little messy.Though, I won’t lie, there are some cringe moments I really want to remove… but that would mean actually going back and reading it again.I just can't do it.
          
          Whenever you have time, I’d really appreciate it if you could go through it and let me know where I could improve.I’m planning to make changes when I publish it on another platform.
          
          Also, if you could share your thoughts on *The Tale of the Broken Hearts*, it would mean a lot.I’ve worked really hard on it, I’ve put a lot more effort into it, and I’m hoping it reflects some growth.
          
          Thank you for sharing your feedback.
          
          Love,
          Qiana❤️

Qiaana01

Hey beautiful ❤️ 
          
          Thank you so much for your vote and for reading my story.It really means a lot.
          Your support keeps me motivated to keep writing.
          
          Love,
          Qiana ❤️

stylequeen_alpha

@Qiaana01  Honestly if the book is that much close to your heart especially since it is your first work I would advice you not to make any forceful changes and keep it imperfect like that. There are still people who love this kinds of books and characters. I would advice you to maybe add a author's note at the start of the book to just let people know that it's ur first book and stuff like that, I think the readers will appreciate it.
            
            And about the book you suggested... I just got a lot on my plate rn.. after I finish with these I'll definitely give it a try.
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stylequeen_alpha

@Qiaana01 Just wanted to add one more thing (with a good motive) you shouldn't  promote characters like those. Most of the readers read books to escape the reality and when you find the same things happening in the book I can't explain the feeling to you bt it's just worst.
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stylequeen_alpha

@Qiaana01 Hey loved the way you write bt the storyline is not for me ig. I know you wrote the story a long time back and I am someone who likes bold fl someone with a better moral character. So dropping the book midway bt would definitely check out ur other books  someday.
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ChaptersAndCoffee

Hey
          I wanted to share something close to my heart.
          Whispers of a wandering heart-its just not a book it’s me trying to do what I love but was always hesitant to do.
          So if you love a easy going,feel good,slow burn,love story about a girl who thinks she can’t get that heart melting,butterflies in the stomach kinda love but then she experiences love at the moment when she least expected it to happen-do give my book a read and share your views on it,it would mean a lot to me
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/398531389?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=ChaptersAndCoffee

stylequeen_alpha

@ChaptersAndCoffee I'm actually into mature themes bt if I get time I'll surely give it a try in the future.
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author_chuhi

Hey love, if you don't mind then can you please visit my book once please and trust me you won't regret it ｡.｡:∞♡*♥
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/396566327?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=author_chuhi

stylequeen_alpha

@author_chuhi The blurb and the tropes are really good bt I don't have the patience to wait for updates so I'll give it a try once you finish the book.
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CallMe_Pri

Hey, 
          I hope you are doing well. I’m sorry to disturb you.. but can I please request you to give my books a try? I really think they won’t disappoint you. 
          And I’m writing this dark romance—erotica, and I really could use your suggestions and feedback. I’ll be very grateful. 
          Thank you so much. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/343347985?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=lonewolf_1912

CallMe_Pri

Thank you ☺️ it really means a lot!
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stylequeen_alpha

@lonewolf_1912 Actually I got a lot on my plate for now....Bt will definitely give it a try when I get time.
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momoo_26

https://www.wattpad.com/story/385765872?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=momoo_26
          
          
          Sorry to write here...but can u check it out Please

momoo_26

@momoo_26 yes
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stylequeen_alpha

@momoo_26 Will it contain smut?
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