Hi, I'm Naomi Ivie and I'm an upcoming writer. I love mystery, adventure and fantasy stories and I plan on writing a lot of them
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stylishrebel429
Dec 20, 2016 12:55PM
Hey people! I just started a new book. It's titled betrayal of a brother. Could you guys suggest ways I could improve it and make it interesting ? Thanks.View all Conversations
Story by Naomi Ivie
The Betrayal of a Brother
This play is about a set of twin princes named Dapo and Ayomide in the Yoruba land of
Ile-Ife. Their father;...