subdiversion

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Editing the fuck out of the apex smutshots book sorry if it’s spamming your feed 

florianwirtzsslut

@subdiversion can you do octane and revenant 
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GarnetGxd

Hi, sorry, don't mean to be awkward but I'm looking for people that would be interested in reading my apex FanFiction and give me feedback. I've posted the first one shot (just wanna know if I should continue or just give up lol). Thank you. 

subdiversion

you’re only awkward if you feel awkward 
            i gave it a read and it was good writing, only critique i can give it is personally i like to use “” when someone is speaking instead of - but everyone has their unique writing style so stick to what you like!
            
            if you need anyone to proof read or need for feedback, i’m your Octane simp, come fetch me.
            
            i’ll be looking forward to the next oneshot (please do Octane i’m thirsty) x 
            
            
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subdiversion

          As for lui he hasn’t spoken out by the time I’m writing this. So I’m not to sure what to say, the girl was 18, fresh out of the classroom door when they met over a game (droidd introduced them but this is certainly not his fault, how was he meant to know his friend was going to prey on her) she’s 18 and lui was around 30. So that’s a 12 year age gap. Disgusting as it is, big age gaps happen more frequently then I think people know. 
          
          Apparently there was another girl but I won’t talk about that as I’m not educated on that matter. 
          
          Anyways, further story’s will not include these two and any other people with allegations that are proven true. 
          
          Bunbun~

subdiversion

About Craig’s and lui’s allegations.
          
          So because of recent events I would like to  put out a few things, I have deleted all my drafts of stories encluding lui and Craig, if not deleted they have been removed from the storie.
          
          This doesn’t go for the published stories though, the reasons for this is because I love to look back and see how much I’ve improved as a writer and how my grammar has graciously decided to, you know, not suck. 
          
          Another reason is because the stories I wrote are not focused just on lui or Craig, it’s the whole gang (as scarce as it’s getting). 
          
          From what I’ve seen on twitter, Craig has apologised but that absolutely does not mean he is excused for his actions. I’m glad he decided to seek professional help, to me though it seems it hasn’t done it’s full job, if Craig wants to get better he needs to fully devote himself to getting better. What he did to those young girls is sickening and now that I’ve heard about Sami being in a very unstable relationship with Craig it seems like he’s falling back on toxic ways. No he didn’t force her to do anything but he was described as “toxic” and “manipulative” in a tweet of Sami’s. 
          (He may be seeking professional help but he sees therapy as a judge who says who’s crazy and who’s not, that’s it, that’s how he sees professionals who have studied for years for that job)
          
          Craig clearly has had a bad mind set, depression and issues previously before dating these girls but still, just because he’s suffered/suffering doesn’t mean these girls should of too. 
          
          I’m not trying to stand up for Craig but we should really look into where he was at the time, in America(legal age is 18) or England (legal age is 16) I believe all girls were over 16 so if it was in England then it’s allowed in the eyes of the law.
          
          I hope those victims get peace of mind knowing others are now aware of Craig. 
          

subdiversion

Sorry to the people that are looking forward to updates on my stories, I’ve not had the motivation to write for a long time now, a year and a lil bit. 
          If you want to yoink one of my ideas ASK first, there are some stories I’m not proud of and will let you re-write or even change up the whole dang thing. 
          My writing is whack anyway lol, I’m not fishing for compliments so don’t say anything, it is whack and the grammar of my younger self KILLS ME. 
          
          Ermmmm I believe that’s it! If I ever do update a story it will be a one/two time thing so don’t expect anything more. 
          Also I’m not in the bbs/misfits fandom anymore, I still love the boys but it’s not the same anymore, they’ve changed. 
          HOPE YOU HAVE A LOVELY DAY/NIGHT!!!

EclipseRainSkyWing

Omg, your grammar kills me

EclipseRainSkyWing

I don't read your stories, I respect you too much. Plus I don't know the fandom. But your grammar in general.
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subdiversion

What story is it lol
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subdiversion

Pfft It kills me too
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subdiversion

I’ll be on a break for a while, I haven’t had any motivation to write for months. I’ll open up Wattpad and then close it the second it loads,
          And if I do start to write I’ll just wright a sentence, So I’ll be taking a break due to family and school problems and lack of motivation! 
          
          Thank you for understanding!