Hehhee, I'm the first to write on your message board! Your story is really good! Or should I say stories because of the ones you wrote in the past! I would probably never surpass you in literacy but maybe in numeracy! I hope you can keep on writing stories like secrets but please don't push yourself too hard and take your time in updating.
Quality of the work is better than quantity of chapters.
Your dear friend/unnie/Authornim/pookie&twiggs/fro&mama buddy
age 14: elaborate, eloquent and good use of punctuation and grammar in sentences to display coherent ideas, themes and messages
age 18: ..,,. hhhHh bObs and Vagene