wifiixaddict

Would it be possible for you to read my story, Wishing There Was More, and give me critiques, because I think you're an amazing writer and I would love to learn from you.

sugardaddystyles

I read the first chapter of your story and it seems like you're off to a good start. Make sure as you continue writing that you keep a constant character flow that adds to the plot. Normally the first chapter of a book should have some type of hook to get the audience interested. So maybe you could switch what you have written as a first chapter right now to a prologue since it gives a lot background information. Then make chapter 1 where you basically introduce the plot and most of the characters. Let me know if that helps, you seem like you're off to a really really good start :)
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MichelleHudson673

Watt pad being a pain it won't load the ne chapter u posted it not show it at all lol

sugardaddystyles

wattpad automatically uploaded the chapter last night but it wasn't complete so I took it down. I should have the new chapter up by Monday hopefully. Sorry.
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