Hey I just finished reading Crimson. It was AMAZING. I love how you describe the situation. The moment where Yoongi was having a war on his mind. Like heck I want to be able to wrote like that, but yeah I'm still learning. I love it you know the angsty part where he gave in. I feel like I was seeing on Yoongi's pov. Like I was actually feeling that harsh moment, when you are feeling down and stuff. YOU KNOW WELL HOW TO PLAY WITH MY EMOTION. Luff yaaa
But I think it will be better if you add more plot. Like maybe how the other member try to help him too. The story is very short actually but well its okay. It is sad that he died in the end but well it doesnt have to end happily.
I'm looking forward for your other story and I hope we can be friend