Sorry, guys, Chapter 22 will have to wait...
Minor overhaul in progress. Gave Chapter 17 the once-over just now--just minor sentence structure and dialogue changes, nothing major. Figured the existing chapters need a few tweaks (with the timeline, for example...) before I update again. Don't know how long that will take though--my nephew's PC broke down a few weeks ago. The thing hasn't been fixed yet, and now the entire household is using my laptop instead. Only get to use it myself on weekends, sigh...
Catch you later, people!