suka1naraza

Would yall forgive me if i unpublished my book? “Burning desire” Im sorry its just so corny and my writing on it is mediocre at its very best. Y’all deserve better…

444-Deftones

NAUURRRR PLS NO
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suka1naraza

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I have semi writers block y’all 
          SPOILER WARNING:
          
          I need help with some points on convincing Veronica to yk kill someone you could probably guess who, Im finding it hard to find things to tell her to manipulate her—idk just seems unrealistic/un natural how Ive written it so far.
          
          Other than the point that she got sexually assaulted by the guy yk, Veronicas an extremely forgiving person and was manipulated her whole life by her family to be perfect kind and forgiving all the time, plus you can tell she was groomed by her brother from the second he got custody of her and  the things and behaviour he had towards her were extremely normalised. so yeah Im really stuck here. Ive dug myself a whole lmao.
          
          Fuck Im so exited about the storyline that about to come but I really need to write this part properly for it to work. 
          
          If anyone has any ideas/points on how Patrick could convince her to do it pleasee reply to this!!

M16rrors

@suka1naraza YAY IM ACTUALLY IN LOVE WITH YOUR WORK !! <3
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suka1naraza

No no this totally makes sense! I actually had the idea of Patrick making up lies about the person but I didn’t think of him saying he did it to other women! Def using that thank you sm!! <3
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M16rrors

@suka1naraza IM SO BAD AT THIS BUT YOU COULD LIKE GET PATRICK TO EXPLAIN HOW BAD IT IS AND THEN SAY HOW SHE SHOULD GET REVENGE AND HE COULD LIE AND SAY THAT THE GUY THEYRE KILLING DID IT TO OTHER PPL AND PATRICK COULD ALSO MAKE UP LIES ABOUT THE PERSON THEYRE GONNA KILL SORRY IF THIS DOESNT MAKE SENSE
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