PacificBlue764

can you generally tell me what can I improve the story?
          Should I increase the word limit?
          Like about 3000 too...
          Is there problem in the flow of the story, are you feeling disconnected somethings or not ...
          Should I elaborate more ...
          Or should I increase no . Scenes ,
          How is the story line , and am I able to do justice with it or not?
          Please answer genuinely...
          

Hsowhebdndkdjs

Hey, I am writing you because I saw you are a follower of  a dark romance author that I also love, and I figured we have the same interests! I wrote my first dark romance story here in Wattpad. I would love if you could check it out and let me know your thoughts ❤️
          
           https://www.wattpad.com/story/386396384?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Hsowhebdndkdjs