PacificBlue764

can you generally tell me what can I improve the story?
          Should I increase the word limit?
          Like about 3000 too...
          Is there problem in the flow of the story, are you feeling disconnected somethings or not ...
          Should I elaborate more ...
          Or should I increase no . Scenes ,
          How is the story line , and am I able to do justice with it or not?
          Please answer genuinely...