sulent14

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Your story has great potential and I enjoyed what I read but, you are in dire need of quotations and correct punctuation. I myself could understand what was going on - most of the time - because my very first story was very confusing and POORLY written. (Lol) I was a very inexperienced WRITER but after reading other stories and practicing writing more stories and asking others what they thought - whether is was positive or negative criticism - I've become a better writer. One thing I did was reread my own story to see if I myself understood what I had written. Usually after I reread it I found myself making corrections and wording things differently.  You should try it. It may help you in a long run.  - @BamonBennett

Omg sorry I'm late af, and sure I'll Love to read ur book:-)

hey thanks for the follow, but i don't do reading requests. i am so sorry, but that's just one of my rules.

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