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Hi there! I'm writing a book called "Runs Scarlet", it's an in progress book and I'm looking for some advice on how to make it better. I'm almost done writing but if you would read it and tell me what you like or don't like that would mean a lot to me!
          It's a Mafia brother type book, pretty common on Wattpad, but it does have a special twist of mine..lots of them actually since it's my own story! :)
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/373016048-runs-scarlet

          
          The ancient book of Ruth is reimagined, through my eyes and maybe you'd be interested to see the way I envision it.✨❤️
          
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          Ruth, a Moabite women, rejected by her own, after a certain incident, quietly searches for the comfort of true love but in every man's eyes and arms, there is no ease or truth or love until she meets Boaz..
          
          
          But before that, it's downhill through the terrains and pain of life. Losing her loved ones, marrying a man, and entering into a unfruitful marriage that lasts a decade and so much more.
          
          
          
          Through it all Ruth finds that the love she desires has always been pouring out of her heart, given to those around her. It's always been waiting in the country Israel for her to know and learn of the name Yahweh.✨
          
          
          
          The desire of love is engraved in every heart, but for others it burns and longs, alot more deeper, bleeding open and leaving scars.
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/368132395?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=purpleskiesanddreams
          
          
          

Hey sorry for posting here like this but if you like reading mafia romances please check my story Dangerous yearning and share your thoughts on it. 

Are you dead or what?

hello

@TheArtsyLady so are you (◕‿◕✿)

@TheArtsyLady   (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤ btw it's in my library so I'll be notified anyways :) but yea I added it so that whoever stumbles upon my ac can read this work of art ♡´･ᴗ･`♡

@TheArtsyLady YESSSS!!!!! :)

          HELPPPPPPP!!!!!!
           
          Anybody knows a long-lost mafia princess book where MC already had a lover ( a mafia heir/gang leader). This lover was shot dead quite long before her fam found her... Now even with the new fam, she's struggling to adjust n move on and is always reminded of the good times they had...something of that sorts...
           
          I forgot the name  (╥_╥)
          
           

Hello salty peanut (eh–didn't want to call u sulker) thank u so much for following me. It means a lot to me <3
          
          Have a great day/night angel.
          Lots of warmth and happiness you way