Lusikah_

Hii remember when I asked if you'd like to participate and you said yes? Now is the time. 
          I want to ask you on a few things. 
          
          1 How do you like the story so far if you critically analysed it, would you say it's fast paced and too much jokes, basically what part do you not like. 
          
          2 What do you think should happen next? 
          
          3 What would you change? 

Lusikah_

@summer222111 You ask and you shall receive, hang on tight tho cause it's gonna take a few chapters 
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summer222111

@Lusikah_  for me I liked every part of it I wouldn’t change anything but I think what should happen next is one of them should get captured and after all of that the rest of the story should be like them growing to LOVE each other and there should be a love interest
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