@summerbelongs2you
Hey @summerbelongs2you! I'm Maya. Your story Unmasking the Heart really touched my heart. The feelings and the way you showed everything stayed with me and I would love to make an artwork based on it in my own art style if you're okay with that.
Oh its really nice so dear how about if we discuss the details first via email, insta or discord?
Hey , do you want to do a vote for vote and I hope you enjoy my series
https://www.wattpad.com/story/392812533?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=ashu2010
@summerbelongs2you thank you so much , I've been working on making my Grammer better as English isn't my first language and overall I'm happy to hear your genuine feedback thank you so much
@ashu2010 dw I've voted all of the chapters you have out rn! Okay, so my main point of feedback would be grammar, which I've noticed has improved in your story since the first chapter. The main things are just capital letters at the start of dialogue and punctuation at the end and some missing commas/full stops. I really like how you describe the settings, and I think that the shorter chapters work for your style of writing and leave the reader wanting more <3 I also like that you've given your side characters personality and storyline and not just the main characters ♡