summerbelongs2you

@summerbelongs2you  thank you so much , I've been working on making my Grammer better as English isn't my first language and overall I'm happy to hear your genuine feedback thank you so much  

@ashu2010 dw I've voted all of the chapters you have out rn! Okay, so my main point of feedback would be grammar, which I've noticed has improved in your story since the first chapter. The main things are just capital letters at the start of dialogue and punctuation at the end and some missing commas/full stops. I really like how you describe the settings, and I think that the shorter chapters work for your style of writing and leave the reader wanting more <3 I also like that you've given your side characters personality and storyline and not just the main characters ♡

@ashu2010 no worries it happens I'd love you're genuine comments and some votes would be nice