@author_manasaveni It good and if you want you can make the chapters look more good and attractive by elaborating the scene, I am not saying to elaborate a lot no that's not need just moderate elaboration according to your comfort you can make it.
This make readers imagine the scene in a better way or I should say the way you want your readers to imagine about the scene or about the characters.
Another thing which is most important is to reach readers. Many used to follow this infact I also used to do the same, try to visit the books that come under same genere of your book, pick readers from the comment section and Tell them about your book, this will help to get more readers.
Overall your plot is Good and unique dear, go for it and I am sure you will get many readers.
All the best ❤️ .
