sun_chips_

I'm not liking this new update...

TaintedRain

not drastically, no c:
          i fixed brianne's attitude up a bit to be less rude and hateful (she's still judgmental in the beginning, but that was kind of the point anyway).
          i added a couple scenes.
          and it's written better.
          
          but it's pretty much the same in the long run c: