Lithuimlistic2004

Hey thanks for voting thanksss soo much

sundog3

@Lithuimlistic2004 Your welcome. I really enjoyed chapter two and seeing how your story is developing.
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Salmaelgarf

Thanks for the follow 
          Could you please check out my book and tell me your opinion Thanks  :)

Salmaelgarf

@Salmaelgarf  yeah it's because the correction in keyboard so I am recorreting the punctuation 
            Thanks for the tip
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sundog3

@Salmaelgarf I like the mystery and pacing in your story. I am not an expert at punctuation but I did have trouble at times following your story due to punctuation. Otherwise it is an enjoyable story as far as i have gotten in it. Thank you for following me too. I appreciate it.
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