Bhoomi2735

Continuation of last post ...
          Basically I would feel skeptical about works which deviates from actual written mythology , but this one is out of my bound. Kudos to author for her work and , For your kind attention : Please don't care about number of reads or votes , Legit work doesn't needs validation . Keep going .Am looking forward for upcoming chapters .And Sorry for such such long para , I actually wanted to convey more to the Author but I hope this much would be too overwhelming . consider this as a outpouring of a fan rather than a critique. 
          Warm Regards , 
          Bhoomi

Bhoomi2735

I think this is the last chapter published as of now . Really wanted to write a long note for the authour until what she have published now.I just started reading this with a lot of expectations , as a mytho fan it would be usual as that to have exceeding expectations. TBH , "MY' expectations were not met , anyways nobody can write to satisfy others' expectation , but this one emerged as a surprize rather than a disappointment , for me. I thought this as a mytho spin off , but actually this is much more than that . Many Authours say 'Reading in between lines' makes the reader understand different dimension. What I understood from these writing , is that ; This is not just a fiction , not just a fan fiction , but much more than that . I can sense the heart of the authour herself poured on the pages as words. The setting itself was like : A Venoumous Monster - The divine himself ; I can correlate with what authour would have thought , Herself as a sinner mortal and her complete surrender towards 'HER'god . I don't know whether the authour is from south india or north , never mind ; But in tamil we have devotional works written before 1500 - 2000 years , in which songs are written in devotion to lord shiva , by saints , in that , in particular , there is a saint called manikkaasagar who wrote soul wrentching thiruvasagam , in which there are many lines the saint says about himself like "Polla vinayen (unredeemable sinner)" , "Eggnanam illadhen (Illiterate fool)" , "Naayir kadaiyay kidantha adiyen (The sinful being more lower than the status of a dog)" - these are some examples which shows his level of devotion like how he feels inferior about himself and how his lord shiva redeems him ; And I can see the same with the authour and krishna . After reading until this I can figure out that the visha kanya is metaphor of authour herself and how she feels her and how she feels krishna . Such work exists so rare and I love this .