sunnyismymiddlename

@misunderstood_001 thank you so much for the great advice! It's good to know someone's opinion

misunderstood_001

Hey,  I saw your post asking me to read your book,  so far I have  read the most recent one that you have added and I thought it was great just a bit confusing because it's taking time to get that something is going on with the girl but it's not that bad,  but what I was really curious about is it doesn't mention her father anywhere in the stories only the uncle,  I understand though if you were going to bring him in later but drop hints to let us know that something happened or is happening with her father.  Even though she isn't still dating Charlie I think he should maybe make a reappearance later in the story  this is just a suggestion so you don't have to do any of it.  
          
          Last I think you should carry on with the book it took me some time to get views and likes just be patient but if you like I can post on my chapters asking people to read it 
          
          Good luck,  Anonymous