Hi :) I have no idea how you found me haha - but I am glad you did. I really like your story! It's really fun and yet I still find it believable. My only advice would be not to get caught up in what other people want for your story - and make sure you know where you are going at least a little. Thats the main reason I get turned off by stories - when they throw in a wedding/pregnancy/some sort of fantastical character cause they have no idea what else to do haha. Not to say that any of those things are bad if they are planned :) I really, really like your story though, and am looking forward to reading more of it :)