suoicsulnim

Hello, beauties! My Heartless Husband 'Kabanata 19' is up! Enjoy.

suoicsulnim

Thank you so much! :)
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Yenne2

@suoicsulnim  hello Ms.A I am also a Writer but I will not promote my works I just Want to say that i Really love  your stories they are still on-going but You already Made me cry..keep the good work..youre writing Skills is the best...
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Shaiireee

SA WAKAS NAKITA KO NA TO ULIT JUNIOR HIGH PA AKO NONG NABASA KO TO SA FACEBOOK TAPOS BIGLANG DI KO NA MAKITA HUHU SANA THIS YEAR MAY UPDATE NA

Micxsz227

@noorsaplidan sakanyang story to, Facebook nya pa nga to naipost bago nya nilagay dito.
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noorsaplidan

@Shaiireee  matagal na pla tong story na to pero hanggang ngaun wlang karugtong? Bka Iba tlga my Ari nito
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reichellemar

          Hi, ish. I recently reading your book and I must say, I found it very enjoyable. However, I couldn't help but notice a few issues that I would like to bring to your attention
          
          As an silent reader and a quite observer, I couldn't help but notice that there were some instances where the term usage seemed off in certain parts of your story. These instances seem to occur quite frequently and while reading through the chapters, I came across a few cases where the expressions or tone of the characters didn't quite seem to fit the scenarios. 
          
          I mean, everytime na iniimagine ko yung expression ng characters sa isang scenario at yung mga iba pang words, naguguluhan ako. Sobrang layo po nung ibang words na ginagamit ninyo at iba na yung meaning. Especially about the way of how they responds to each other( mad abruptly, like that.) Of course, I understand that writing is a complex process, and sometimes, the right words can be difficult to find but I believe that the use of more appropriate terms would greatly enhance the readers' understanding of the characters' feelings and make the story even more immersive.
          
          Please understand that I am by no means a professional critic, nor am I trying to throw a "bitch fit." I am simply a reader who has noticed these issues and felt the urge to share my thoughts with you. I hope you don't take my feedback the wrong way. I truly appreciate the hard work and creativity you've put into your writing, and I  look forward to read more of your work!

suoicsulnim

@reichellemar hi! Thank you for taking the time to write about this. I approach criticism with an open mind, a willingness to learn, and the mindset that there is always space for improvement. I've never taken criticism personally. 
            
            I was only sixteen when I began writing "Unreachable Zacharius," formerly known as "MHH," so imperfections were unavoidable. I was a novice, and I believe I still am, given the fact that I quit writing more than two years ago. To bring a bit of light on the issue, would you mind informing me which terminology I used that you find strange? I'd appreciate it if you could offer me with "appropriate" terms to replace those. It would also be greatly appreciated if you could send me any scenes or chapters where the characters' attitudes or tone did not appear to fit the scenarios.  
            
            You don't need to worry about offending me. Readers are expected to express their thoughts on the story they're reading. In fact, I am always grateful for these types of comments, as I could use them when I am ready to write again. Thank you for bringing this up.
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