superah246

Hey I would really appreciate if you could check my new book out! And if you don't than I'm sorry for bothering

Hey there! You asked me if I could read your book and give some advice, so here it is: I would work on making the cheater longer by expressing the characters emotions more and stuff like that. Also, I would just work on the English side of things so it's a tad easier to read :)
          
          Love ya
          Violet