NeonChopstix

Hey , Loving your story , a bit predictable though.

superockerz

@NeonChopstix thank you for the tips ... I will surely use it in my story soon...
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NeonChopstix

@NeonChopstix maybe you make the 2 characters switch their aim or ....... Something
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NeonChopstix

@NeonChopstix make the expected unexpected
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