THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR FEEDBACK. No joke, your feedback and comments have really, really improved my first chapter! Thank you for lending me so much of your time =D
My writing- much better than it was when I posted Love is Weird
Me- incapable of writing for a period longer than 15 minutes
Also, wattpad has kinda died for me since I found AO3 (which is much better, an actual LUXURY)
I think I want to commit murder to the people that have written Luz/Alador Blight fanfiction because it exists. It’s there. It’s scary. I’m scared. Help.
Okay so upon finishing Amphibia because SICK something I noticed the writers did really well was foreshadowing. Every detail and spare/jokey line had some kind of warning and I love it. I aspire to do that more with my own writing. After, y’know, I’m no longer coughing up phlegm :)
To further my point of “I’m an idiot” I would like to share with you all exhibit b- I can’t understand a language I can speak and read. I am (partially) fluent in Mandarin after A DECADE OF STUDYING and I do this dumb thing where I can’t understand what I’m reading. Like this sentence? Boom. I know the characters. So I can understand it, right? Nope. I have no idea how I do this…
I swear I’m such an idiot, I just put my hand over my heart to feel it beating and I couldn’t so my brain said “what if you don’t have a heart ” and then I stopped breathing for a sec and then it hit me. I’m alive. And probably too tired to be awake right now.