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@DreamerByTheMoon I hope you have a great day

@DreamerByTheMoon Of course! And thank you for being so kind ^^ I'll be there to support

@DreamerByTheMoon yes, truth me told I really do enjoy your works and I read them during my free time. Thank youuu I've only started writing, thank you for your love and support, means a lot. 

Ok

Other than that it's really nice:) 

@cupcakes_glumdrops maybe add some pictures ..not too much. And I think the plot right is like a little congested try adding spaces between the conversation 
            
            Example ; 
            
            Joe; Hey ! How are you doing. 
            
            Jane; fine 
            
            Joe: ok 
            
            So like this ..makes it easier and the readers will feel like reading it .