dopeboxs
okay, deal.
dopeboxs
:b bye sunshine, you'll rise tomorrow
dopeboxs
SUSAN! You're alive! bless you, buddy [:
hmaries99
What's a funny/ good tittle for a rant book? And help me come up with ideas for some rants... (:
dopeboxs
awe, we can be losers together!
*gives sentimental hug*
dopeboxs
Give Austin a hug for me.
love you, too! [: x
hmaries99
I'm back for more feedback :) What did you think of the new chapter in Elisa? and What were you thinking while reading it?
susansmiles
I love how you expressed her reaction to her mother's death. Like how she freaked out- kinda- and took to being alone as she dealt with it. I also liked you ended the chapter with Harry and her and how he said he'll be there for her- because I think maybe that's what she's been looking for, someone to be there so she's not entirely alone when something major in her life gets shoved in her face
dopeboxs
Captain America is freaking awesome!
but Flash is better
hmaries99
@MsAnonymous_x I live for so many things in life and hearing your feedback on my story(s) is one of them. Xx.
hmaries99
What did you think of the new chapter?
susansmiles
omg, I thought it was insanely good! The way she was thinking about everything, then that moment with Harry (; and the end! The ending was what really got me. It was like everything just overwhelmed her and she passed out. Like all the stress and worries was just too much for her.
but it was great and I can't wait for the next chapter!