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Omg! I just came across your book. I know I'm years late but you have written facts on it....love your rambling 

Are you here ..i just read your book about cliche islamic stories .
          
          
          Will it be weird if i say im in love with ur thinking ..u remind me of me lolx .. 

Are you on Instagram????

Assalam walaikum sis. Okay firstof your (see I used your) book is AMAZE BALLS.  I was literally laffing like a hyena (jo my laugh is magical :p). You're awesome ;)

An idea for a chappie:
          
          On the MC's wedding day, when the makeup artist dolls her up, she stands in front of the mirror. Usually goes something like this 200% of the time :
          
          I stood in front of the mirror, the reflection stared back at me. Who is this beautiful girl? I had no idea. My mind clouded with confusion, then soon realization took over. That girl was me. (WELL NO DIP YA DIPSHIT) 
          
          Ma came and stood behind me. A look of awe sprawled on her lovely face. 
          " my beautiful girl is all grown, she's getting married today." Tears started to run down her cheek. 
          Soon tears of sadness spilled out and I stood, sobbing with my mother. I was going to leave her and my family. With a man I hate. (Of course ;) )
          "Aah Beti! Don't cry, you'll ruin your makeup!" Said mama 
          I sniffled and only nodded my head, unable to speak anything. 
          Soon baba came to take me to the wedding hall . 
          "My daughter is leaving me today." I could see his eyes glazed. 
          I hugged my father tight as if I'd never see him again. 
          Why did I have to leave me family behind?! Oh my allah, please give me the strength to get through this! I will miss them so much! I'm only going through this marriage for them. 
          I squeezed my eyes shut. (Of course her mascara isn't ruined :), repeating to myself over and over that this marriage is for the happiness of my parents and family. 
          I will try my best to make this marriage work. InshAllah. 
          
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          Lol I'm not Muslim, but I read a lot of Islamic love stories and literally they all have this same scene.
           I hope I didn't offend anyone lmao and my use of "inshallah" is correct. 
          But yeah, just an idea for another chapter (which are hilarious btw) 
          
          - Harshini 

I like you. like really u make sense. I'm out of praises

I like you. like really u make sense. I'm out of praises

salaam,
          just read your dumb moments book.It was awesome though and pretty much true. Now the thing that catches most of my attention is the British/American clash. Dude you're right! never seen an American book here (like we don't even exist, yes am an American too  :-) 
          
          so I have three more things/suggestions/ideas/problems/*insert whatever word suits* That you can add in your book
          
          1: LOL! (too much lol on everything)
          
          2: (period..ehm *clears throat*)
               why does every writer mention the girl's period, I mean it ain't necessary and let's not forget,
          
          husband: you not praying?
          wife: (blushes)um..... no
          husband: why?
          wife: (blushes even more) um....you really wanna know?
          husband: (confusingly nods)
          
          I mean seriously? BOYS KNOW!!! No need to make the boy seem confused and everything. Plus men don't push it too far.
          
          3: (pregnancy and delivery)
          so it is very much necessary to mention that the girl is pregnant and lets not forget,
          
          girl: "YOUSEF!!!"
          boy: (runs panting to his wife) "yes?"
          girl: (tears running down the cheek)"I want chocolate!"
          
          OK! So we all are well aware of the fact that pregnant women feet emotional, cranky and have cravings, but making a whole chapter out of it, puh-lease!
          
          nurse: "push! push!"
          girl: (screams/cries/strangles the Nurse to death whatever)
          and a baby pops out! 
          
          I mean stop it already! we all get it what happens in that ward/room, NO need to put it in every book!
          
          so you see, I've made my point I hope? please put it in your book cuz it drives me crazy!
          
          and....in the end! I LOVED your book and your humour is Amazing! sorry for the extra LONG message but I felt like having a nice chat with the only person on wattpad that thinks like me. Thank god!
          
          see ya!
          
          
          
          

very very hilarious, *dies laughing* .... OK that was dumb, I can't be like you lol. but hey, you should seriously update soon. people here love your book wallah

So I found your book on wattpad today and it is the funniest and realist book I have read in my entire life!! Like all the thinks that I thought about when I read some Islamic books was written in your book! It be totally awesome if you wrote more chapters but I understand cuz i'm a senior in high school and I understand how hard it gets to have free time. But the books great so you should totally write more! And while I was read I could not laughing and my mom thought that I was on the phone with my friend and told me to hang up! But it was just you! Your great sense of humor!!