svmmerborn

Finally updated chapter 6!!! It's mostly a filler and there are some continuity errors (spoilers: a lot) because I changed up so much of the story and characters I go along, and I was writing in a semi-comatose state anyway. Going back now to fix it.
          	
          	Some changes:
          	-Marli's surname (from Morris to Morris-Vu)
          	-Marli's father name (now Cezar, surname pending)
          	
          	Also I'm taking this opportunity to take Toby out of my stories as compliance to his creator's wish! If you missed it, Kastoway/grisgrisdoll has been official about wanting to remove Toby out of creepypasta for a while now, and like a complete goof I didn't catch the memo until now. So, I'm bringing in a new character called Teddy, whose personality resembles fanon!Toby without the tragic backstory. He's just a trainee electrician turned proxy who has a slight stutter and a thing for blowing up stuff, and you'll see what he looks like once I settle on a design for him.

svmmerborn

Finally updated chapter 6!!! It's mostly a filler and there are some continuity errors (spoilers: a lot) because I changed up so much of the story and characters I go along, and I was writing in a semi-comatose state anyway. Going back now to fix it.
          
          Some changes:
          -Marli's surname (from Morris to Morris-Vu)
          -Marli's father name (now Cezar, surname pending)
          
          Also I'm taking this opportunity to take Toby out of my stories as compliance to his creator's wish! If you missed it, Kastoway/grisgrisdoll has been official about wanting to remove Toby out of creepypasta for a while now, and like a complete goof I didn't catch the memo until now. So, I'm bringing in a new character called Teddy, whose personality resembles fanon!Toby without the tragic backstory. He's just a trainee electrician turned proxy who has a slight stutter and a thing for blowing up stuff, and you'll see what he looks like once I settle on a design for him.

svmmerborn

use quarantine wifi to update hospice we stay winning
          anyway chapter 5 is up! or as i like to call it: hospice: now with proxies
          
          plus few adjustments to overall story:
          -marli’s name (originally spelled marley)
          -marli’s age (originally 17 now 19)

svmmerborn

PSA: @agalaxyfaraway's Black Water is. extremely good. well written. amazing. I love it. 
          
          And guess what??? you can read it without prior knowledge of the black hole that is Creepypasta too!! It's for everyone. Maybe not kids-under-13 everyone, but. everyone. 
          
          What the hell, go read it. The final arc is coming soon, and I betcha it won't disappoint!

svmmerborn

@agalaxyfaraway Always happy to be of assistance <3
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agalaxyfaraway

@svmmerborn I could hug you right now. I honestly think you're the sole reason why I even got this far, so thank you so much!
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svmmerborn

I wrote an unrelated extra to introduce this new completely out of the frame mysterious character. It's only like 500 words damn maybe I should start putting out this kind of volume and not the 2000 word soup I usually do.