svniia

:)

msiclvr

Hello sorry I know this is out of nowhere but could you please possibly read a book I made it is called Wolves It only has 3 chapters but Im working on it I would GREATLY appreciate if you could tell me if it is sounding ok

ravenhall

Hey can you check my work? I'll appreciate if you read and comment your thoughts. Xo
          Love, 
          Raven.

svniia

It’s pretty good. My favorite character already is Len. He’s kind but funny which I find admirable in guys. A bit of typos but that’s common. Small mistakes but they can be fixed. Overall it’s a great book and you have me hooked. Keep updating and I’ll let you know what I think. xox
            
            <3 sonia
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svniia

Say Alpha Kenny Buddy slow, then say it fast. Then hear yourself ;)

svniia

@PrinceIsRoyalty yea some sixth grader told me that, and I’m dumb so I didn’t get it at first. Skskks
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