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ethan~ please read my book. This is my very first book and I would like to know how I did. And if I need to change my style and improve or if it's already ok.
          
          It's a Jimin ff~ The title is ||Shy Oppa||
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/198576485-shy-oppa-park-jimin

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Hii!!! Happy 14th birthday Ethan! Thank you sa lahat, thank sa pag tulong saakin. Lalo na kay "lip tint" (secret code natin incase you forget) 
          
          Lalo na ngayon.. alam mo na yung nangyari. Anyway! I luv u! Hindi natin 7 sinasabi yun sa isat isa pero totoo yun. Mahal ka namin Ethan. Thank you sa lahat! Perfect ka talaga maging big brother.
          
           Kahit 3 months lang ang agwat natin sa age HAHAHA!!! 
          
          Short nang message go noh? Sorry ah, hindi ako katulad ng iba, hindi ako katulad nilang lima. Pero I'm trying my best.
          
          

Happy 14th birthday Ethan! Mga ulol kami pari dito mag greet noh? Meron namang facebook or instagram. Pero extra kami eh!
          
          Hahahaha!!!! Basta! Happy birthday! Thank you! I love you!
          
          Sinabi na nila lahat nang gusto kng saabihin eh, pero since alam ko na tinatamad kang bumasa, yung short version nalang yung akin.
          
          Pero seryoso! I luv u ah? Enjoy yor bithday!!!!!

Happy birthday fafi~~!!! Yieeee!!! HAHAHAH gagi mapatay pa ako ni Ella. Anyway! Happy birthday ulit. Aki una nag greet sayo ah! Nakalimutan ng iba. I'm such a great friend *flips hair*
          
          HAHAHAHHA!!!  Anyway, I love you. Takot ako sayo dati, alam mo kung bakit? It's because I was gay. Even though the 7 of us were already friends, we were not that close because I was scared, I was scared that you will judge me because of my sexuality.
          
          But, ikaw pa yung nag protect saakin when other kids bullied me, ikaw pa yung nag risk ng behaviour mo para saakin para tumigil yung mga ibang bata mangbully.
          
          Ikaw yung tipong kuya na gusto ko, I know I make sexual jokes like "daddy" "choke me" you know what I mean! Pero! Tandaan mo na I respect you, I respect you and Ella, joke joke lang yun. Mahal kita as a friend, and I hope ako nanaman ang maka tulong sayo in the future.
          
          I love you!❤❤

Happy birthday you bastard! Sorry we couldnt great you at exactly 12 am. Alam mo namin kami mga kaibigan mo~ mga tamad katulad mo.
          
          Pero, in all seriousness, thank you sa lahat, from being an older brother from being our saviour. 
          
          Violent ka most of the time, hindi mo macontrol ang galit mo, pero alam namin na para yun saamin. Thank you talaga Ethan, hindi mo alam kung gaano namin ka thankful na nakilala ka namin. Actually kami lima glad kami na binully mo kami dahil sa line sa canteen HAHAHAHAH
          
          Pati si Elle, inamin niya na takot siya nung pinakilala siya ni Daniel sayo, pero she warmed up to you.
          
          What I'm trying to say is, thank you so much, thank you inaccept mo ang pagaka loser naming 6 HAHAHAAH mapapatay talaga ako nang iba.
          
          Anyway! See you later.

Ethan~~ I'm sorry that I couldn't greet you! Elle just texted us that we forgot to great you at 12 am!!!!!!!! We were already sleeping and she called *grin*
          
          Anyway! Happy 14th birthday babe! Thank you so much for being such a wonderful boyfriend/brother. Spending 1 year with you was like a dream cheesy, I know. But that's how I feel when I'm with you.
          
          I love you so much, you just dont know it. We dont say it often since we think that it's cringy... but today, since it's your special day, I'll say it to you. I LOVE YOUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
          
          Thank you for everything and the 6 of us are very lucky to have an older brother like you *even though daniel is a few months younger than you*

@Bangtanite he does

I was scared to tell my parents that I was gay. I was scared that people would judge me fir my sexuality, I was scared that no one will love me because being gay is a sin for them. I felt so alone and scared to come out. I was so scared to lose my parents and my friends.
          
          But then 6 angels stayed beside me, and you're one of them. And I can't thank you more for accepting me, I lost most of my friends, and I lost the respect of my father. But you 5 angels stayed, thank you so much for supporting me for who I am, and who I want to be.
          
          I love you❤❤❤

@CADJ99 ewan ko na sainyo