thank you so so much for the feedback!! i’m glad you’re enjoying the story - and yes i agree, mouse dog bird is AMAZING, best radiohead fanfic imo. i will definitely go back and improve this scene in the ways you suggested, i was quite nervous to write a smut scene and may have rushed it (not writing enough foreplay etc) and i’ll clarify about the pregnancy thing in the story too! so glad you like the story ❤️❤️