Mia Eshel

@swan5712 phew that was a lot I hope I helped and if you plan on editing the chapters I'll be happy to go over them again and point some more things out if need be :D

@KoalaNeko message me.

Okay how should I go about it? Comment about it, re-read it and say here, or message you?

@Jheril19 No prob 

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