But I’m intrigued when will she find out they killed her mother and her reactions to knowing
Hopefully you could put that she runaway and they kidnap her back or something like that, just suggestions
@minigo1234 Great ideas! And honestly I have no clue when to update. I've lost motivation and I'm tryna find some and plus I have to read thru my book again since I kinda forgot some key stuff that I will need for my future chapters
@eclipswe__ you're welcome! I would also say try and enter some competitions and awards, if you scroll down you can see some awards I'm participating in. That will definitely attract more readers, whether you win or not.
@eclipswe__ okay! And thank you so much for the advice! I am absolutely new into this section of writing, and I would definitely love to know the parts i could improve on... to attract more readers ❤️
@eclipswe__ I'll wait for you to finish the book and read it :) I've skimmed thru a few chapters and maybe make your chapters longer, that might help attract more readers and definitely add more tags. I hope you don't mind me giving you some advice. I just think this story would flourish if you do that! :)