sweetncoco

hiii

Swirly_gurl

Hello, I like the story, but I noticed the comments regarding you using “vagina.” This is honestly constructive criticism, but when writing sexual scenes, don’t use proper terms of anatomy when describing sex (when people are sexually aroused.... they are in their primal state of mind, very animalistic... grunting and growling. If I’ve offended you, it was not my intention. If you ever decide to edit, if you’re not offended maybe look for a beta reader. Great start to your story.

sweetncoco

Hi everyone! 
          It's been a while...I've been feeling the urge to write and get back into my passion for writing and creating stories. 
          
          So, with that being said, I am excited to tell you guyssss that I will be recreating Swept! I wrote Swept while being a freshman in high school, I am now about to enter my last semester of college. With me being much older now, I would like to create a new look and adult approach to Swept. 
          
          Same story but with a twist. I am still fixing up the fine details but expect something absolutely great. 
          
          Expect new chapters being uploaded very soon. I am currently writing the new chapters and I will upload as soon as those chapters are done. 
          
          I am incredibly excited and I hope you guys are too! I will be creating new stories as I have tons of stories in mind but my main priority is fixing up Swept and giving it a more adult approach.

IvyHunter0

@Bridget__Araba I am looking forward to it!!!  Congratulations on your education!!!
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