sweetrock12

Hi Fam!
          	
          	What do you think of the pacing of the story? Should i speed it up? A time jump (even though the show got me hating them)
          	Anything you felt not touched on by show that needs fixing? Maybe i will try to squeeze it in for the sake of fan service. 
          	Just don’t ask me to write any explicit/ mature sexual content, i am not good in writing that. 
          	I am an old romantic soul which is why i fell in love with Eşref Tek and Eşsan as a couple so i am gonna focus on their love story.

sweetrock12

Unfortunately due to the incompetence of Ethem we never saw the pregnancy plot develop. And i agree with you the show did too many time jumps it ruined the flow of the story. 
          	  Right now its too early for Ruya to speak so maybe i will do a different story like a sequel to this with an appropriate time jump and maybe a second pregnancy ‍♀️
          	  Thank you for your feedback
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YvhGii

I really like the way you write the story. Please don’t include a time jump. I’d love for you to focus more on their family life, like the first time Rüya says “Mom” or “Dad.” It would also be nice to see more of Nisan’s pregnancy  again and Eşref taking care of her, since we didn’t get to see those moments in the actual TV show because of the time jump.
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sweetrock12

Hi Fam!
          
          What do you think of the pacing of the story? Should i speed it up? A time jump (even though the show got me hating them)
          Anything you felt not touched on by show that needs fixing? Maybe i will try to squeeze it in for the sake of fan service. 
          Just don’t ask me to write any explicit/ mature sexual content, i am not good in writing that. 
          I am an old romantic soul which is why i fell in love with Eşref Tek and Eşsan as a couple so i am gonna focus on their love story.

sweetrock12

Unfortunately due to the incompetence of Ethem we never saw the pregnancy plot develop. And i agree with you the show did too many time jumps it ruined the flow of the story. 
            Right now its too early for Ruya to speak so maybe i will do a different story like a sequel to this with an appropriate time jump and maybe a second pregnancy ‍♀️
            Thank you for your feedback
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YvhGii

I really like the way you write the story. Please don’t include a time jump. I’d love for you to focus more on their family life, like the first time Rüya says “Mom” or “Dad.” It would also be nice to see more of Nisan’s pregnancy  again and Eşref taking care of her, since we didn’t get to see those moments in the actual TV show because of the time jump.
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