sweetsarelife14

Hey guy i was wondering if you could check out my new story. I've been reading on wattpad and would now like to write my own story https://www.wattpad.com/story/110977144

Beautiful_Tragedy47

hey! plz check my new book "The Felon" . I would really appreciate if you give me few suggestions regarding my new n first to be written book

Beautiful_Tragedy47

tysm n I mean it..n I'll definitely rely on ur opinion 
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sweetsarelife14

@Scarletheartfelia12 Hi I checked out your book. It's a good plot. However there are a few things you might want to tweak. Obviously you don't have to listen to me but these are just suggestions: 
            - Use capital letters. It makes you look more professional.
            - Make sure you have enough paragraphs so the layout is nice 
            - Check spelling. I know thats hard but it makes a huge difference 
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