I just have to say a couple of things, first you are a phenomenal writer, and your expression of words is amazing. And the detail on how you describe things I wish I possessed the same ability.! How do you do it? i’m in the middle of writing my first book. I don’t know if I’m going to post it yet, but to comparison with yours, there’s no way I would even consider posting mine. I know you probably get asked this a lot, but would you consider giving tips or even looking over my story and filling in descriptions on where you think it could be improved?