sweetwhine

i'm trying REALLY HARD to be a good writer but i don't think it's working out

sweetwhine

all the straights on here write another story "jaded girl falls in love with mysterious bad boy" and the have the gall, the cajones, the bravery to say "this is a love story that you've never seen before. it's DIFFERENT" 
          
          don't come at me unless you exclusively write about lesbians.

sweetwhine

hey, everyone! my completed story 'something among the weeds' is out and it be great if you looked at it! it's a short story about magic and falling in love. i'm sorry if it's very bad or there are continuity errors, i wrote this on a four day writing binge. it's 11900-something words long and i did not spend much time editing. let me know if you find something to nitpick! i'm always out to better my work.

lovesickblues

boa i read breathe again today and i am continually shaken and taken away by your writings wow how do you do it

juxtapoz

@sweetwhine if you’re referring to the first two poems, they can be rewritten and turned into incredible oeuvres, but the rest is beautiful enough they’re sacred
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lovesickblues

no it's not you idiot
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sweetwhine

@lovesickblues wym everything in there is old + cringy
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lovesickblues

sky will you ever complete a story

sweetwhine

@lovesickblues anything 4 u babe ;)
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lovesickblues

the sun has died and maybe if you could write a little more of breathe that'll be great thanks
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lovesickblues

i'm glad u feel attacked bc you should be (also no flattery but i'd read your grocery list. just complete them)
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galaxyidiot

it's time for you to update your bio it says "boys who find themselves and die" but your latest book is about an already dead boy your bio is inaCCURATE

galaxyidiot

I SMILED VERY MUCH
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sweetwhine

this message may be offensive
@galaxyidiot i updated my bio you fuck i hope it makes you squeal with happiness 
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galaxyidiot

and my heart rests a little
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