swiftieforev13

I took down my story "The Guardian Six | The Ice Gem" because I simply could not stand the horrible writing in that book  I'm going to rewrite the chapters, change a few things, and hopefully turn it into something actually worth reading... I'll send out a notification again when I finally publish it again :) Thank you to those who have supported me since the very beginning, but for now, I need to improve my writing skills and plotting :D Love all of my followers and I hope that you'll read my story in the future ^^

quilled_writer

Would you mind checking out my book? Feedback is very appreciated

swiftieforev13

sure :) I checked out I Am Reese but I feel that maybe the part where Amanda and the guys attack her with the knife in the school could have more of a lead up to, otherwise it's slightly sudden and the attack could have more suspense :) overall, I LOVE THE PLOT AND THE CHARACTERS LIKE DAMN
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swiftieforev13

I took down my story "The Guardian Six | The Ice Gem" because I simply could not stand the horrible writing in that book  I'm going to rewrite the chapters, change a few things, and hopefully turn it into something actually worth reading... I'll send out a notification again when I finally publish it again :) Thank you to those who have supported me since the very beginning, but for now, I need to improve my writing skills and plotting :D Love all of my followers and I hope that you'll read my story in the future ^^

swiftieforev13

To those who are reading my book 'The Guardian Six | The Ice Gem', I just added a CAST!! OH MY GOD YASSSSSSS!!!!!! I've been trying for I don't know how long omg yasss CHECK IT OUT :)
          
          TO THOSE WHO ARE NOT READING MY BOOK: PLS DO CHECK IT OUT (VOTE AND COMMENT TOO ;) RLLY APPRECIATE IT IF YOU CHECK IT OUT THX SO MUCH ^^