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No offense but you need to stop re-editing your stories. I read the very first version of Swim like 16 years ago when you posted it after “Crash”. 16. Years. Ago. It was perfect then, and every edit since has been great - but so unnecessary. It’s a beautiful, meaningful story, with so much depth. Every character has so many layers and every interaction is so genuine, you truly have a talent that I would say most writers are missing. It’s been 16 years. Just leave it and move on to another! It was great, and still is great, but just leave it! 16 years. Move on to the next story and stop re-editing! Leave Swim behind and use your talent towards the next great thing, and let people enjoy this! What a pity to withhold it.

hey, u good?

Hope all is well with you  I love your writing and look forward to hopefully reading it again one day

I cannot stop thinking about this book, I fell so in love with all the characters. Is there anywhere the story is still available ? I’d hate to lose the opportunity to reread this amazing book.

Did you move these stories to another site? Or have they been taken down for editing/permanently? I would love to reread Swim again.

I’ve been reading swim since you posted the edited version and you are such a talented story teller. I was wondering if you are doing another round of edits? I’d love to reread swim and of course read the other two books when you are ready to post them.

plss plsss post the book 2 im waiting from so long , so eagerly

hello! I finished swim recently and loved it - I saw other people commenting about sink and tred (which I assume are other books in the series) and was wondering whether it is possible to read these somewhere?? 

How many chapters are left for the swim
          

Oh man, I miss this book soooaur much