MichaelSalamone7

Hey I noticed a lot of spelling and grammar problems in your spiderman and the boys story. If you would like I can read over chapters before you post them so you can fix some of them. For free obviously. I do really enjoy the story though. Let me know

swordstyle

@MichaelSalamone7 I think I'm fine but thanks for the offer, I'll make sure to reduce as  much as possible thanks for enjoying the story
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HoumanMv

Thank you .
          
          Please fix chapter 1 of the story and remove Clark because there is only one superman in the story and that is Hiroto. 
          Because only Nev-el is saved from the destruction of Krypton with the power of doomsday and the child is found by sarda and sasuke and sakura adopt the child and raise him. 
          
          Also, hiroto awakens his power at the age of 5 and becomes superman at the age of 7 and fights with the villains boruto and darkside.
          
          Also, hiroto is not weak to kryptonite or anything else due to doomsday's power and is powerful and invincible  
          
          Also, hiroto uses his power to protect his older sister sarada, his parents, his friends, and the village of konoha, and hiroto becomes Naruto's strongest rival .

HoumanMv

@swordstyle 
             Hello . 
            When will the next chapter get ready ?!
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HoumanMv

@swordstyle 
            Thanks
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swordstyle

@HoumanMv alright I think i can make him 7
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