@Dream_big96 I only follow those whom I believe to be good writers. Your characters are entertaining and your stories aren't over the top dramatic with right amount of cliché. True, you may not have the best punctuation or spelling(which truely isn't bad in my opinion), but you have great ideas and clever dialogue. Please keep writing, I look forward your next update.
I'm so glad that your enjoying it and I know about the spelling and grammar I was never a good student and I don't edit but I hope their at least readable.
@Dream_big96 It's really good so far, with the exception of punctuation and a few spelling errors, it's really well written and well thought out so far. I love that you didn't give away the plot right away like most writers make the mistake of doing. It tugs at my curiosity.