ChocolateAndT
Hello Sylvia! Hope you are doing well! I'm ChocolateAndT and I submitted a webtoon adaption of your wonderful book for the Project Portal Contest. Starting to just read the first few chapters, I ended up reading all of book 1 and start book 2! The push and pull and the angst were all just *chefs kiss*. :) I was wondering if you would be open to letting me know feedback and thoughts on my adaption of your book? I would love to know what you, the author, thinks! I am open to criticism, as well! This is all only if you are open to it, though. I don't want to force you in this position and I won't take it personally if you would rather not! Here's the link for easy navigation: https://www.wattpad.com/story/379520488-treasured-by-the-dragon Thank you for your time. Cheers. :) Kindly, ChocolateAndT
sylviaNgould
@ChocolateAndT Happy to provide feedback for something like this! It killed me not being able to vote and comment on entries. It was so thrilling to see different interpretations and I'm so so grateful to you and everyone else who submitted! And thank you, I hope readers will enjoy season 3!
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ChocolateAndT
@sylviaNgould Thank you so much for writing back such a detailed and thoughtful feedback! I really appreciate the time you took to write this. It's great to hear what you thought of this interpretation and what you liked. I am so glad I was able to depict her expressions accurate enough to your vision. Thank you again for taking the time to read the submission again and responding with your thoughts!! It means a lot to me to read what you have to say! There were so many unique entries for your story and I loved reading their interpretations, as well. Thank you for allowing your story to be a part of the contest. Also- congrats on the recent Book 3 of the series! I'll have to weave out time to read that, as well :) Until next time! Take care. And thank you, again. Kindly, ChocolateAndT
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sylviaNgould
@ChocolateAndT Hi! Sorry it took a long time to reply. I'm forever in a state of being behind on things. Anyway, thank you for all the kind words about the series and for choosing to make a comic for it! I really love being able to see folks interpretation of the story. I'm glad you asked. I read through all of them back when the contest launched, but I couldn't do anything since I was a judge, so I'm glad you reminded me to go back and give it another look :) I really love the composition of your panels! They're all very dynamic and at interesting angles. There's also a lot of energy in how you move from panel to panel so I think it keeps up the intensity. I also liked how you portrayed her reflections on her wedding and how her parents failed to raise money for the tribute. I particularly liked the image of a puppet and how you went from her standing at the wedding she dreamed of and then mirroring it with her standing at the altar for sacrifice! I also loved Taliyah's expressions! You really nailed those. That cold resolve and snarky stubbornness is exactly what I was going for in the book. So I think it was a great adaptation and I'm so excited I got to see your version of the story!
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