syncbrzy

So I saw a post on a page on facebook where they ask their followers to create a 2 sentence horror story and it will be posted on the page's timeline. I also submit an entry but it still not yet posted(or will never be). But this gave me too many ideas and my thoughts are flooded by these very short stories that's why I decided to create a compilation of it that stacked up in my mind. If you have time pleaaase take a look, and tell me what you think.
          	
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/294526522?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=syncbrzy&wp_originator=93jDRrbgSlPaGUW2BRb24JBeEVKcBcinTHgTOBvilkkDa9FRKJrmaKE24ECaIq%2BHSjHkINFOvPpmUt%2B94L0zBbl1Wy%2BsXfmx3FCrB8aRXlo3Tw4mkfTQFcbH9Mcgfx5t

syncbrzy

So I saw a post on a page on facebook where they ask their followers to create a 2 sentence horror story and it will be posted on the page's timeline. I also submit an entry but it still not yet posted(or will never be). But this gave me too many ideas and my thoughts are flooded by these very short stories that's why I decided to create a compilation of it that stacked up in my mind. If you have time pleaaase take a look, and tell me what you think.
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/294526522?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=syncbrzy&wp_originator=93jDRrbgSlPaGUW2BRb24JBeEVKcBcinTHgTOBvilkkDa9FRKJrmaKE24ECaIq%2BHSjHkINFOvPpmUt%2B94L0zBbl1Wy%2BsXfmx3FCrB8aRXlo3Tw4mkfTQFcbH9Mcgfx5t

DelleLuna

Hi! I just want to share my story to all of you. Kung may time po kayo maaari niyo po itong basahin. Hindi po kayo magsisisi   Open din po ako sa mga comments niyo kung may violent reaction and etc. Sana I-vote niyo rin po ito, malaking tulong na po sa'kin yun   Kapag bored po kayo feel free to message me, don't worry hindi ako nangangain ng tao HAHAHA friendly po ako   Thank You! God Bless and Stay Safe   Mahal ko kayo  MWAH
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/200218970

syncbrzy

I really want to improve my stories' dialogues. But it always turns bland, direct and generic. It sucks for me as these are also my problem even when im talking personally, I always lacking on something to say, my vocabulary is bad kaya kahit gaano "kaganda"(or not) yung mga idea ko sa plot eh nagiging boring kapag dialogue sequence na. I hope na maiprove ko kung saan ako nag kukulang, di ko din masabi dahil almost wala akong reader to help me grow. At sa mga nag babasa ng story ko, harigathanks sainyo kahit less romance yung ginagawa ko.
          Im always trying.