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Well Well Well, After some planning I've finally started a new book called "When Time Stopped" I plan on it being a short story that takes place after the events of Episode 8 of Limited Life!
It's based on the idea of "What if they didn't die after getting to 0?" and following different members as they try to figure out what is going wrong and how to fix it!
Hello! After a year I've finally edited chapters 1 ~ 38. It'd take a while to re-read them all, so I've compiled a list of what I'd consider important updates, then some less important and some fun facts at the end! SPOILERS if you haven't read up to 38, and the list continues in the replies!
REALLY IMPORTANT (Affect the main story/characters)
- Luke's kinder towards Grayson, conflicted with emotions.(7~24)
- Amber? Who's Amber? Her name doesn't pop up anywhere!(8)
- Armen doesn't remember his promise to the Nightmares.(10+19)
- Armen promises Grayson not to self-harm. He's determined to keep it (12)
- Grayson and Drake repair their friendship (13) and they stay on good terms until Chapter 21.
- Luke only finds out about Armen in Chapter 17 not 10(17)
- Chapters 21 to 26, he knows something's up with Drake and only finds out about possession in chapter 26.
- Chapter 22 is VERY different, changing Markus' and Luke's characters, I'd suggest to re-read it but here's some changes:
+ Markus was unable to overpower Luke, Luke's idea to confront the trio.
+ Grayson and Armen argue, resulting in Markus' senses overloading
+ Luke and Markus are more serious & emotional.
+ Markus wasn't alone, a woman was tasked to look after him.
+ Luke says his final goodbyes to Grayson.
+ Drake doesn't suggest Armen and him to accompany Grayson
- Those bearing a emerald burnt into their skin are people who'll follow Ferox to the bitter end. (23)
- Grayson forces Drake and Armen to help rescue Luke.(23)
- Drake tells Grayson to leave instead of Grayson just running off. (25)
- Grayson's calm and not an insane bastard. He's more in control of his thoughts and still thinks of Armen as a friend, recognising his wrong-doings.(26)
- Markus' talk with Leon is pretty different, (would suggest re-reading Chapter 31)
- Markus is too suspicious of surrounding to tell Leon the truth.(31)
- Grayson tries to dispose of the book in the water but is unable to bring himself to do it. (33)
That's all of it! I'm excited to continue with the story now that I've gotten a better grasp of how I plan to present the characters along with the plot! :D
- At the village, Grayson realises they're cultist and freezes. (32)
- Question Armen asks book are different and Grayson Angy/worried at end instead of just o v o (33)
- Markus suggests Leon to practice with Bow & Obstical course instead of swords.(37)
Fun facts of the book!
Book's story time starts late September(27th~30th)
Markus born late October
Leon born Mid June
Grayson's wife called Annabelle(Anni) and I forgot that :,D
Lily of the Incas - flowers associated with Hero ;)
Seasons matter!
Mia likes to speak quickly since she'd never have the chance to speak for long as a kid
Drake and Armen are the only ones who call Hero 'Hero' the rest call him a demon.
- Grayson is VERY different in his actions and reactions to Armen, he's kinder, more regretful, genuinely concerned but unable to figure his thoughts out. Overly sorry about putting the necklace on Armen. (35)
LITTLE DETAILS (Neat lil changes/facts)
- Hell has a hierarchy and different names for all the layers(2)
- There is no skeleton and the trio doesn't go down to the sign room from Second Life(removed from 9)
- Yadu-era is the name of an era full of magic and the origin of a lot of the magic and magical creatures.(9)
- Grayson suspects Armen as the cause of Luke's betrayal after Luke mentions a demon(10)
- Chapters 12 to 16, Grayson is at his best, highest possible point and most like himself.
- Drake doesn't search for the charm but instead searched for the Dark Magic Book(13)
- Hero claims he let Drake's charm 'work' for fun(13)
- Grayson tells Luke about Drake's possession in chapter 20, he's able to link it to Collin and his fevers in the Artic.(19)
- Grayson doesn't remember promising Armen to burn the book(21)
- Hero doesn't need Ferox but acts like he does for Fun (23)
- The event known as 'The Eruption' refers to the magical library exploding and the volcano going boom! (23)
- Markus isn't trying to get Armen to save Luke, he's too focused on Luke (24)
- Grayson's less aggressive to Armen but still is an arse to him. (24)
- Luke's final words directed towards Grayson (made me cry-)(24)
- Armen doesn't trust Drake to look after him whilst sleeping but dozes off anyway(25)
- Short fevers are more likely to be because of Collin, longer and more damaging ones because of Hero (29)
- Grayson asks Mia to travel with them in front of Armen.(29)
- When Drake remembered Collin, he never told him why he was in his head (30)
- Collin can't talk of deal, if he does the void spreads (30)
- Not a note but I cried trying to write this chapter (31)
I- I removed 1457 words from a chapter- I disliked the overall tone of it so it was justified but my god-
10~11 chapters left then I can finally continue with a sane mind :,D
Woop woop, re-writ 3 chapters today-
Turns out Chapters 12 & 13 are probably the moments when Grayson shines his true colours, the real him before all that juicy conflict pops in again. It shows him as caring, worried and loving towards his friends. Friendship, a really powerful thing but also a doomed train track.
Just wanna say something about why I write such sensitive topics since I feel like I need to explain-
I have multiple reasons as to why but I feel the main reason is that it makes me feel like I can deal with more things. Knowing that these characters experience such extreme scenarios and get out of it alive makes me believe I can face smaller issues that I'd previously find hard to deal with. If they can survive hell and back then I can survive a lotta things as well and I kinda want to show people that they too can survive things like this - even if I don't show it that well - it's what I intend.
Just wanted to clarify it-
Be Gé do crime
Bruh, when onto the book and some of the later chapters were at the start whtvwkrb sorry bout that! Dunno how that happened but oh well
So I've re-written bits of Chapter 1 and 2. The main thing is in Chapter 2 because it's been completely changed in a lot areas and now includes more lore. So please go check it out if possible, announcements like this may come again if I ever add important plot to past chapters since I'm going to slowly go through the past chapters and re-write certain part for plot or just logical things.
Once one reads THEIR book. They're too far gone...
Hell, to be in possesion of the book is already a death sentence in itself.
One by one their minds will wilt. One by one their minds will crack. One by one their minds will go. Until there's two left...
Two...
Hm...
Will they still be there?
Will they be gone?
Well... we all know one thing...
Curse the mind to curse the heart.
Isn't that right...
Grayson?
The nightmares are knowledgeable beings, they know things others don't. It's allways been said that they can tell the future, mainly events that have yet to happen. Alas, only the magi can understand them... well, they'd understand them if they didn't try to kill them... but if you're a lucky soul that gets to listen to their words, it's always best to heed their warnings.
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Eirvjabs second time writing this cuz my English is bleh. In chapter 19 there is some word the nightmare says and previously it was in Galactic then Ceaser Cipher for a reason but I now realise that it doesn't quite make sense. So now it's just galactic so you only need to decode it once. :)
